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Jamison of Bronze Jamisk [RFR]

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Jamison of Bronze Jamisk [RFR]

Jamison of Bronze Jamisk
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"Ooh, Shiny~."
Junkrat (Overwatch)


BASICS

NAME: Jamison
GENDER: Male
PRONOUNS: Masculine
ORIENTATION: Demiromantic Demisexual

BIRTHDATE: Spring 2746
AGE: 25 as of Early Fall 2771
LOCATION: Semaca Weyr
OCCUPATION: Wherhandler
WING: Lamentoso Squad

APPEARANCE
EYES: Brown
HAIR: Blond
HEIGHT AND BUILD: 6'6" and lanky
PLAY-BY: Junkrat from Overwatch
FULL APPEARANCE:
Jamison is a lanky and tall man with a sharp chin. He tends to have a grin on his face and has bags under his eyes due to his lack of sleep. He has blond hair that is often pointed up, as if something exploded and made his hair stand up on end. He is heavily scarred on both his right arm and his left leg from both his youth and threadfall injuries. He has a mole on his nose and light facial hair.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
Jamison, at first glance, is incredibly energetic. He is often the loudest in the room and doesn't seem to know what an inside voice is. He is quite imaginative as well, often telling stories and making up stuff on the spot. He is even known to lie and exaggerate the truth in order to tell HIS timeline of events, even if it doesn't really make sense. He can be easily distracted by shiny rocks and has a small collection of them he keeps in his room. Along with this, he is known to gloat and inflate his own ego without caring about what others think.

Along with this, he can be rather insensitive at times. Even if someone is grieving, he'll just say to get over it, not caring about their feelings and, for the most part, just wanting them to stop moping around. He will even do this to people in a higher position as his own. Along with this, his pent up energy often has him running around without listening to instructions, often complaining that they're taking too long and he wants to hurry up. He can be incredibly impatient due to this, often remarking that 'candle wax's wasting away'.

HISTORY
FAMILY: N/A
SIGNIFICANT OTHER: N/A
BIRTHPLACE: Ista Weyr
HISTORY:
Jamison had a pretty average childhood, if not an adventurous one. He lived his entire life in Ista Weyr, being raised by two weyrfolks. However, he spent most of his time running around and playing with other children, both in the creche and from fellow weyrfolks. He wasn't the leader of their friend group.

If anything, he was the group clown and he loved it. He loved to make up random and weird stories, laughing as his friends enjoyed them. Eventually, this group of friends would become candidates, Jamison joining them at the age of fifteen.

However, he would eventually change his mind about becoming a dragonrider. He grew to love whers. They looked powerful and he really liked the idea of having a wher being by his side and helping to defend the weyr during Threadfall on the ground. His friends were a bit surprised, but they encouraged for him to become a wher candidate.

After all, he seemed to really want it.

From that day on, Jamison was a wher candidate, though he was a bit sad that his friends and him were on different schedules. He made an attempt to attend all of the hatchings to cheer them on if they impressed. After all, he felt they would do the same for him if they could.

Shortly after his twentieth birthday, he attended a hatching and was grinning from ear to ear when an egg was moved over to him. As the egg hatched, a humungous bronze wher poked his head out, giving a bit of a snort as Jamison rubbed blood on his forehead. A lot of people saw this as a good fit, as Jamison was still excitable and hyperactive even as a wherling. However, Jamisk was quite calm and went at his own pace. In fact, it seemed like the wher only cared about two things at all: food and Jamison.

Jamison graduated two turns later. All of his friends had impressed at the time and were studying to become dragonriders. He was happy for them, he truly was. However, he was now busy and he couldn't attend every hatching, even if he attempted to. This made him sad, but Jamisk would always cheer him up by nudging against him and giving a slight huff.

Even if the wher was silent, he knew exactly how to cheer Jamison up.

However, Jamison was growing bored of Ista Weyr. Sure, it had been his home his entire life, but staying in one place felt boring. He decided to change it up and decided to, on a whim, to go to Semaca Weyr.

After all, it was a relatively new weyr! Who knew what awaited him there!

He arrived in the late fall of 2771, ready to start his adventure.
Last edited by ShelbCake on Fri Apr 09, 2021 9:56 am, edited 8 times in total.
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Z'rya of Bronze Gravith (Midnight Wing)
Wingleader Ozma of Brown Akioth (Eclipse Wing)
Regal of Brown Brickth (Eclipse Wing)
Clover of Blue Kurceth (Aurora Wing)
Journeyman Healer Kouichi of Green Kuzoth (Healer's Wing)
Haru of Green Rosaceaeth (Aurora Wing)
Flynn of Green Nith (Daylight Wing)
Zanza of Gold Zansk (Dusk Squad)
Yuri of Blue Yurisk (Dawn Squad)
Reyn of Green Reysk (Dawn Squad)
Eclipsa of Green Eclipsk (Dawn Squad)
Weryling Shulk of Blue Arachoth
Wherling Zagi of Green Zask
Journeyman Harper Candidate Aoi
Candidate Alder
High Reaches
Leon of Bronze Chopith (Firestorm Wing)
Weiss of Garnet Glyphith (Moonshot Wing)
Jacek of Garnet Rinisath (Moonshot Wing)
J'ack of Blue Reyth (Starfall Wing)
Oscar of Blue Currth (Raindance Wing)
Flora of Green Linpheth (Healer's Wing)
L'ouis of Green Tomoeth (Raindance Wing)
Magnius of Brown Magniusk (Windsong Squad)
Maple of Green Plesk (Sunburst Squad)
Ironwood of White Ironwosk (Windsong Squad)
Candidate Sol
Candidate Genis
Candidate Edsel
Candidate Inosuke
Semaca
Wei'ling of Porcelain Lillyth (Lamentoso Squad)
Glassi of Brown Fuwath (Nocturne Wing)
Zelos of Blue Lupruth (Chopin Squad)
Shinku of Blue Cinnimith (Pavane Squad)
Dedue of Green Essengeth (Chopin Squad)
Solhrae of Green Herth (Requiem Squad)
Edalyn of White Lechuzath (Minuet Wing)
Genn of Brown Gesk (Weyr Guard)
Ercilia of Garnet Ercilisk (Mazurka Squad)
AWH Palutena of Blue Lutenask (Weyr Guard)
Dimitri of White Dimisk (Chopin Squad)
Weyrling Penny of Brown Sedatath
Candidate Akai
Candidate Damario
Candidate Wrathion
Candidate Henri
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Bronze Jamisk
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BASICS

NAME: Jamisk
BIRTHDATE Fall 2766
AGE: 5 as of Late Fall 2771

APPEARANCE
LENGTH: 16ft
HEIGHT: 5.75ft
COLOR: Bronze
HEX CODE: #3B3924
FULL APPEARANCE:
Jamisk is a large bronze wher that generally appears to be very annoyed, often with a disgruntled look in his eyes and on his face. He is quite overweight. However, he is also quite muscular, with most of his muscles build up in his legs. He is a light greyish tan color with a darker green bronze covering his face and outside of his wings. His markings appear as if he has gear already on him, such as shoulderpads, straps, gloves, knee protection and boots. On his tail, he has faded markings of a chain.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
Jamisk is often a very annoyed wher, often giving off snorts of annoyance and just glaring at most people, dragons and whers. He honestly prefers to be alone, but is willing to work with others if he is being rewarded in some way (often with Jamison offering him treats). He is a very food centric wher and tends to savor each meal he catches. After all, he can't go hunting all the time, so might as well savor what he catches while he can. He tends to bump into other whers if they get in his way, not caring if he hurts or annoys them in all honesty.

It seems the only person he truly cares about is Jamison. He is very protective of his handler and enjoys spending time with him. Jamison is one of the few things that can motivate him to move around. If he had his way all the time, he would be in his weyr asleep until it was time to hunt for his next meal. He has a fondness of shiny rocks, much like his handler and likes to collect them.
Last edited by ShelbCake on Fri Apr 09, 2021 4:30 am, edited 2 times in total.
Fort
Z'rya of Bronze Gravith (Midnight Wing)
Wingleader Ozma of Brown Akioth (Eclipse Wing)
Regal of Brown Brickth (Eclipse Wing)
Clover of Blue Kurceth (Aurora Wing)
Journeyman Healer Kouichi of Green Kuzoth (Healer's Wing)
Haru of Green Rosaceaeth (Aurora Wing)
Flynn of Green Nith (Daylight Wing)
Zanza of Gold Zansk (Dusk Squad)
Yuri of Blue Yurisk (Dawn Squad)
Reyn of Green Reysk (Dawn Squad)
Eclipsa of Green Eclipsk (Dawn Squad)
Weryling Shulk of Blue Arachoth
Wherling Zagi of Green Zask
Journeyman Harper Candidate Aoi
Candidate Alder
High Reaches
Leon of Bronze Chopith (Firestorm Wing)
Weiss of Garnet Glyphith (Moonshot Wing)
Jacek of Garnet Rinisath (Moonshot Wing)
J'ack of Blue Reyth (Starfall Wing)
Oscar of Blue Currth (Raindance Wing)
Flora of Green Linpheth (Healer's Wing)
L'ouis of Green Tomoeth (Raindance Wing)
Magnius of Brown Magniusk (Windsong Squad)
Maple of Green Plesk (Sunburst Squad)
Ironwood of White Ironwosk (Windsong Squad)
Candidate Sol
Candidate Genis
Candidate Edsel
Candidate Inosuke
Semaca
Wei'ling of Porcelain Lillyth (Lamentoso Squad)
Glassi of Brown Fuwath (Nocturne Wing)
Zelos of Blue Lupruth (Chopin Squad)
Shinku of Blue Cinnimith (Pavane Squad)
Dedue of Green Essengeth (Chopin Squad)
Solhrae of Green Herth (Requiem Squad)
Edalyn of White Lechuzath (Minuet Wing)
Genn of Brown Gesk (Weyr Guard)
Ercilia of Garnet Ercilisk (Mazurka Squad)
AWH Palutena of Blue Lutenask (Weyr Guard)
Dimitri of White Dimisk (Chopin Squad)
Weyrling Penny of Brown Sedatath
Candidate Akai
Candidate Damario
Candidate Wrathion
Candidate Henri
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Hey, I wanted to ask to make sure that this part of his personality is alright:

'He often seems jittery and is always ready to move. He has little to no awareness of his environment at times and will often trip over his own feet.'

I wasn't considering it his flaws, but I was worried if it was too similar to other characters I've had and if I should change this sentence.
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Z'rya of Bronze Gravith (Midnight Wing)
Wingleader Ozma of Brown Akioth (Eclipse Wing)
Regal of Brown Brickth (Eclipse Wing)
Clover of Blue Kurceth (Aurora Wing)
Journeyman Healer Kouichi of Green Kuzoth (Healer's Wing)
Haru of Green Rosaceaeth (Aurora Wing)
Flynn of Green Nith (Daylight Wing)
Zanza of Gold Zansk (Dusk Squad)
Yuri of Blue Yurisk (Dawn Squad)
Reyn of Green Reysk (Dawn Squad)
Eclipsa of Green Eclipsk (Dawn Squad)
Weryling Shulk of Blue Arachoth
Wherling Zagi of Green Zask
Journeyman Harper Candidate Aoi
Candidate Alder
High Reaches
Leon of Bronze Chopith (Firestorm Wing)
Weiss of Garnet Glyphith (Moonshot Wing)
Jacek of Garnet Rinisath (Moonshot Wing)
J'ack of Blue Reyth (Starfall Wing)
Oscar of Blue Currth (Raindance Wing)
Flora of Green Linpheth (Healer's Wing)
L'ouis of Green Tomoeth (Raindance Wing)
Magnius of Brown Magniusk (Windsong Squad)
Maple of Green Plesk (Sunburst Squad)
Ironwood of White Ironwosk (Windsong Squad)
Candidate Sol
Candidate Genis
Candidate Edsel
Candidate Inosuke
Semaca
Wei'ling of Porcelain Lillyth (Lamentoso Squad)
Glassi of Brown Fuwath (Nocturne Wing)
Zelos of Blue Lupruth (Chopin Squad)
Shinku of Blue Cinnimith (Pavane Squad)
Dedue of Green Essengeth (Chopin Squad)
Solhrae of Green Herth (Requiem Squad)
Edalyn of White Lechuzath (Minuet Wing)
Genn of Brown Gesk (Weyr Guard)
Ercilia of Garnet Ercilisk (Mazurka Squad)
AWH Palutena of Blue Lutenask (Weyr Guard)
Dimitri of White Dimisk (Chopin Squad)
Weyrling Penny of Brown Sedatath
Candidate Akai
Candidate Damario
Candidate Wrathion
Candidate Henri
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You have written a number of clumsy characters recently, so please just leave it out of this one.
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Essa of Bronze Gectusith
Quinn of Bronze-White Louicyth
Wingleader S'bor of Bronze Yugoth
ACM Estelle of Brown Jaehaeryth
Faralyn of Brown Grooth
Ieyasu of Brown Ieyask
P'pin of Brown Palath
T'rin of Brown Celeth
G'er of Garnet Neozeoth
Lily of Garnet Eridieth
Relli of Garnet Rellivask and Blue Relsk
Augury of Blue Velveth
Chrysanthe of Blue Bidath
Gellera of Blue Virtrath
Miryem of Blue Riwenth
Thor of Blue Hinokath
Adora of Green Meilith
Elyron of Green Elyrosk
Kiriani of Green Tabesleuth
Wingsecond L'ir of Green Byth
S'atyl of Green Nineveth
Makoto of White Usakinth
Rhaenys of White Cosmiath
Wingsecond Tyrion of White Voluntauth
Cole
High Reaches
Cynthia of Gold Eliask
Hela of Bronze Helsk and Brown Hesk
Schneizel of Bronze Damocleth
Azul of Brown Claarisath
Di'a of Brown Kasshuth
Dobby of Brown Kersuth
Wingleader Myalla of Brown Enarth
Th'ou of Brown Pavith
Wingsecond D'ark of Garnet Masreith
Eliza of Garnet Riaath
N'ell of Garnet Pamith
Squadsecond Tomas of Garnet Tomask and White Tsk
Weyrling Master Camilla of Blue Kamuith
Jae of Blue Zappath
Sayla of Blue Sacroth
Tamara of Blue Requeth
Yvaen of Blue Bolduth
Zhuli of Blue Zhusk and Blue Lisk
Ailee of Green Suventh
Kanon of Green Kibeth
Kip of Green Amizuth
Numann of Green Rannath
Raine of Green Spriggth
Sokka of Green Wintrath
T'ir of Green Blysith
Riku of White Taissath
Semaca Weyr
Arena of Void Oscamith
Alayna of Gold Wyzeth
Al'bus of Bronze Matanuth
Noor of Bronze Nuunieth
Hermione of Brown Echoneth
Sage of Brown Wisketoth
Shuri of Brown Motath
Varda of Brown Magmeth
Ly'nk of Garnet Sakuyath
Maui of Garnet Mausk and Blue Mask
Uruk of Garnet Georsath
Anoni of Blue Cermurith
Artemis of Blue Phoebuth
Corleon of Blue Corleosk and White Corlesk
D'vir of Blue Cainhurth
Candidatemaster Naxen of Blue Anitoth
Point Rigel of Blue Cygneth
Ya'ra of Blue Dymrith
Ariel of Green Kshatriyath
Quintar of Green Task
Rhea of Green Rheask
Captain Vella of Green Vellask and Magma Vesk
V'rell of Green Peridoth
Wyatt of Green Emilith
Laera of White Tarth
Kowal of White Kowalsk
R'tan of White Mazath
Steward Molly
Candidate Pasca
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Alright, he's RFR
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Z'rya of Bronze Gravith (Midnight Wing)
Wingleader Ozma of Brown Akioth (Eclipse Wing)
Regal of Brown Brickth (Eclipse Wing)
Clover of Blue Kurceth (Aurora Wing)
Journeyman Healer Kouichi of Green Kuzoth (Healer's Wing)
Haru of Green Rosaceaeth (Aurora Wing)
Flynn of Green Nith (Daylight Wing)
Zanza of Gold Zansk (Dusk Squad)
Yuri of Blue Yurisk (Dawn Squad)
Reyn of Green Reysk (Dawn Squad)
Eclipsa of Green Eclipsk (Dawn Squad)
Weryling Shulk of Blue Arachoth
Wherling Zagi of Green Zask
Journeyman Harper Candidate Aoi
Candidate Alder
High Reaches
Leon of Bronze Chopith (Firestorm Wing)
Weiss of Garnet Glyphith (Moonshot Wing)
Jacek of Garnet Rinisath (Moonshot Wing)
J'ack of Blue Reyth (Starfall Wing)
Oscar of Blue Currth (Raindance Wing)
Flora of Green Linpheth (Healer's Wing)
L'ouis of Green Tomoeth (Raindance Wing)
Magnius of Brown Magniusk (Windsong Squad)
Maple of Green Plesk (Sunburst Squad)
Ironwood of White Ironwosk (Windsong Squad)
Candidate Sol
Candidate Genis
Candidate Edsel
Candidate Inosuke
Semaca
Wei'ling of Porcelain Lillyth (Lamentoso Squad)
Glassi of Brown Fuwath (Nocturne Wing)
Zelos of Blue Lupruth (Chopin Squad)
Shinku of Blue Cinnimith (Pavane Squad)
Dedue of Green Essengeth (Chopin Squad)
Solhrae of Green Herth (Requiem Squad)
Edalyn of White Lechuzath (Minuet Wing)
Genn of Brown Gesk (Weyr Guard)
Ercilia of Garnet Ercilisk (Mazurka Squad)
AWH Palutena of Blue Lutenask (Weyr Guard)
Dimitri of White Dimisk (Chopin Squad)
Weyrling Penny of Brown Sedatath
Candidate Akai
Candidate Damario
Candidate Wrathion
Candidate Henri
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-Pern does not have enough valuable treasure for treasure hunter to be a career for anyone or even make much sense as a dream.

-Pern also does not have enough shiny things lying around for him to be regularly distracted by them, as Pern doesn't have coins and metal is too valuable to be abandoned which just leaves shiny rocks, most of which aren't "Catch your eye from across the weyr" shiny.

-Jamison would not be allowed to stay at Semaca or any other weyr if he makes a habit of stealing other people's things. The weyrs do not take repeated theft lightly.

-If Jamison and Jamisk are untrustworthy, unreliable and not good at working with others, they wouldn't be allowed to remain in the Weyr Guard.

-Jamisk also would not be able to find a large number of shiny things on Pern.

-Whers generally work at night. If Jamisk is going out multiple times to eat, Jamison would be ordered to lock his door to prevent this because at some point it becomes less about food and more about a real problem to herdbeast populations.
Fort
Essa of Bronze Gectusith
Quinn of Bronze-White Louicyth
Wingleader S'bor of Bronze Yugoth
ACM Estelle of Brown Jaehaeryth
Faralyn of Brown Grooth
Ieyasu of Brown Ieyask
P'pin of Brown Palath
T'rin of Brown Celeth
G'er of Garnet Neozeoth
Lily of Garnet Eridieth
Relli of Garnet Rellivask and Blue Relsk
Augury of Blue Velveth
Chrysanthe of Blue Bidath
Gellera of Blue Virtrath
Miryem of Blue Riwenth
Thor of Blue Hinokath
Adora of Green Meilith
Elyron of Green Elyrosk
Kiriani of Green Tabesleuth
Wingsecond L'ir of Green Byth
S'atyl of Green Nineveth
Makoto of White Usakinth
Rhaenys of White Cosmiath
Wingsecond Tyrion of White Voluntauth
Cole
High Reaches
Cynthia of Gold Eliask
Hela of Bronze Helsk and Brown Hesk
Schneizel of Bronze Damocleth
Azul of Brown Claarisath
Di'a of Brown Kasshuth
Dobby of Brown Kersuth
Wingleader Myalla of Brown Enarth
Th'ou of Brown Pavith
Wingsecond D'ark of Garnet Masreith
Eliza of Garnet Riaath
N'ell of Garnet Pamith
Squadsecond Tomas of Garnet Tomask and White Tsk
Weyrling Master Camilla of Blue Kamuith
Jae of Blue Zappath
Sayla of Blue Sacroth
Tamara of Blue Requeth
Yvaen of Blue Bolduth
Zhuli of Blue Zhusk and Blue Lisk
Ailee of Green Suventh
Kanon of Green Kibeth
Kip of Green Amizuth
Numann of Green Rannath
Raine of Green Spriggth
Sokka of Green Wintrath
T'ir of Green Blysith
Riku of White Taissath
Semaca Weyr
Arena of Void Oscamith
Alayna of Gold Wyzeth
Al'bus of Bronze Matanuth
Noor of Bronze Nuunieth
Hermione of Brown Echoneth
Sage of Brown Wisketoth
Shuri of Brown Motath
Varda of Brown Magmeth
Ly'nk of Garnet Sakuyath
Maui of Garnet Mausk and Blue Mask
Uruk of Garnet Georsath
Anoni of Blue Cermurith
Artemis of Blue Phoebuth
Corleon of Blue Corleosk and White Corlesk
D'vir of Blue Cainhurth
Candidatemaster Naxen of Blue Anitoth
Point Rigel of Blue Cygneth
Ya'ra of Blue Dymrith
Ariel of Green Kshatriyath
Quintar of Green Task
Rhea of Green Rheask
Captain Vella of Green Vellask and Magma Vesk
V'rell of Green Peridoth
Wyatt of Green Emilith
Laera of White Tarth
Kowal of White Kowalsk
R'tan of White Mazath
Steward Molly
Candidate Pasca
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Edited. I decided to move them to Lamentoso Squad, as I still don't think they'd really be trusted in the Weyr Guard
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Z'rya of Bronze Gravith (Midnight Wing)
Wingleader Ozma of Brown Akioth (Eclipse Wing)
Regal of Brown Brickth (Eclipse Wing)
Clover of Blue Kurceth (Aurora Wing)
Journeyman Healer Kouichi of Green Kuzoth (Healer's Wing)
Haru of Green Rosaceaeth (Aurora Wing)
Flynn of Green Nith (Daylight Wing)
Zanza of Gold Zansk (Dusk Squad)
Yuri of Blue Yurisk (Dawn Squad)
Reyn of Green Reysk (Dawn Squad)
Eclipsa of Green Eclipsk (Dawn Squad)
Weryling Shulk of Blue Arachoth
Wherling Zagi of Green Zask
Journeyman Harper Candidate Aoi
Candidate Alder
High Reaches
Leon of Bronze Chopith (Firestorm Wing)
Weiss of Garnet Glyphith (Moonshot Wing)
Jacek of Garnet Rinisath (Moonshot Wing)
J'ack of Blue Reyth (Starfall Wing)
Oscar of Blue Currth (Raindance Wing)
Flora of Green Linpheth (Healer's Wing)
L'ouis of Green Tomoeth (Raindance Wing)
Magnius of Brown Magniusk (Windsong Squad)
Maple of Green Plesk (Sunburst Squad)
Ironwood of White Ironwosk (Windsong Squad)
Candidate Sol
Candidate Genis
Candidate Edsel
Candidate Inosuke
Semaca
Wei'ling of Porcelain Lillyth (Lamentoso Squad)
Glassi of Brown Fuwath (Nocturne Wing)
Zelos of Blue Lupruth (Chopin Squad)
Shinku of Blue Cinnimith (Pavane Squad)
Dedue of Green Essengeth (Chopin Squad)
Solhrae of Green Herth (Requiem Squad)
Edalyn of White Lechuzath (Minuet Wing)
Genn of Brown Gesk (Weyr Guard)
Ercilia of Garnet Ercilisk (Mazurka Squad)
AWH Palutena of Blue Lutenask (Weyr Guard)
Dimitri of White Dimisk (Chopin Squad)
Weyrling Penny of Brown Sedatath
Candidate Akai
Candidate Damario
Candidate Wrathion
Candidate Henri
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The characterization of a person as untrustworthy because they're excitable or easily distracted is extremely insulting to people with ADHD, myself included. This personality needs significant rewriting. End of story.
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I have rewritten his personality and would like to apologize for that, Fel. I also have ADHD and had not noticed it was offensive. I hope you can forgive me for that
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Z'rya of Bronze Gravith (Midnight Wing)
Wingleader Ozma of Brown Akioth (Eclipse Wing)
Regal of Brown Brickth (Eclipse Wing)
Clover of Blue Kurceth (Aurora Wing)
Journeyman Healer Kouichi of Green Kuzoth (Healer's Wing)
Haru of Green Rosaceaeth (Aurora Wing)
Flynn of Green Nith (Daylight Wing)
Zanza of Gold Zansk (Dusk Squad)
Yuri of Blue Yurisk (Dawn Squad)
Reyn of Green Reysk (Dawn Squad)
Eclipsa of Green Eclipsk (Dawn Squad)
Weryling Shulk of Blue Arachoth
Wherling Zagi of Green Zask
Journeyman Harper Candidate Aoi
Candidate Alder
High Reaches
Leon of Bronze Chopith (Firestorm Wing)
Weiss of Garnet Glyphith (Moonshot Wing)
Jacek of Garnet Rinisath (Moonshot Wing)
J'ack of Blue Reyth (Starfall Wing)
Oscar of Blue Currth (Raindance Wing)
Flora of Green Linpheth (Healer's Wing)
L'ouis of Green Tomoeth (Raindance Wing)
Magnius of Brown Magniusk (Windsong Squad)
Maple of Green Plesk (Sunburst Squad)
Ironwood of White Ironwosk (Windsong Squad)
Candidate Sol
Candidate Genis
Candidate Edsel
Candidate Inosuke
Semaca
Wei'ling of Porcelain Lillyth (Lamentoso Squad)
Glassi of Brown Fuwath (Nocturne Wing)
Zelos of Blue Lupruth (Chopin Squad)
Shinku of Blue Cinnimith (Pavane Squad)
Dedue of Green Essengeth (Chopin Squad)
Solhrae of Green Herth (Requiem Squad)
Edalyn of White Lechuzath (Minuet Wing)
Genn of Brown Gesk (Weyr Guard)
Ercilia of Garnet Ercilisk (Mazurka Squad)
AWH Palutena of Blue Lutenask (Weyr Guard)
Dimitri of White Dimisk (Chopin Squad)
Weyrling Penny of Brown Sedatath
Candidate Akai
Candidate Damario
Candidate Wrathion
Candidate Henri
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Staff has discussed, and decided that this portrayal of stereotypical ADHD traits in a strongly negative light is unacceptable. We will not be accepting this character.
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Essa of Bronze Gectusith
Quinn of Bronze-White Louicyth
Wingleader S'bor of Bronze Yugoth
ACM Estelle of Brown Jaehaeryth
Faralyn of Brown Grooth
Ieyasu of Brown Ieyask
P'pin of Brown Palath
T'rin of Brown Celeth
G'er of Garnet Neozeoth
Lily of Garnet Eridieth
Relli of Garnet Rellivask and Blue Relsk
Augury of Blue Velveth
Chrysanthe of Blue Bidath
Gellera of Blue Virtrath
Miryem of Blue Riwenth
Thor of Blue Hinokath
Adora of Green Meilith
Elyron of Green Elyrosk
Kiriani of Green Tabesleuth
Wingsecond L'ir of Green Byth
S'atyl of Green Nineveth
Makoto of White Usakinth
Rhaenys of White Cosmiath
Wingsecond Tyrion of White Voluntauth
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High Reaches
Cynthia of Gold Eliask
Hela of Bronze Helsk and Brown Hesk
Schneizel of Bronze Damocleth
Azul of Brown Claarisath
Di'a of Brown Kasshuth
Dobby of Brown Kersuth
Wingleader Myalla of Brown Enarth
Th'ou of Brown Pavith
Wingsecond D'ark of Garnet Masreith
Eliza of Garnet Riaath
N'ell of Garnet Pamith
Squadsecond Tomas of Garnet Tomask and White Tsk
Weyrling Master Camilla of Blue Kamuith
Jae of Blue Zappath
Sayla of Blue Sacroth
Tamara of Blue Requeth
Yvaen of Blue Bolduth
Zhuli of Blue Zhusk and Blue Lisk
Ailee of Green Suventh
Kanon of Green Kibeth
Kip of Green Amizuth
Numann of Green Rannath
Raine of Green Spriggth
Sokka of Green Wintrath
T'ir of Green Blysith
Riku of White Taissath
Semaca Weyr
Arena of Void Oscamith
Alayna of Gold Wyzeth
Al'bus of Bronze Matanuth
Noor of Bronze Nuunieth
Hermione of Brown Echoneth
Sage of Brown Wisketoth
Shuri of Brown Motath
Varda of Brown Magmeth
Ly'nk of Garnet Sakuyath
Maui of Garnet Mausk and Blue Mask
Uruk of Garnet Georsath
Anoni of Blue Cermurith
Artemis of Blue Phoebuth
Corleon of Blue Corleosk and White Corlesk
D'vir of Blue Cainhurth
Candidatemaster Naxen of Blue Anitoth
Point Rigel of Blue Cygneth
Ya'ra of Blue Dymrith
Ariel of Green Kshatriyath
Quintar of Green Task
Rhea of Green Rheask
Captain Vella of Green Vellask and Magma Vesk
V'rell of Green Peridoth
Wyatt of Green Emilith
Laera of White Tarth
Kowal of White Kowalsk
R'tan of White Mazath
Steward Molly
Candidate Pasca
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