Aevalae of Green Avanith [WIP][ADOPT-Event]

[Ezra]

Aevalae

"You can't live without the fire, for its the heat that makes you strong."
--Within Temptation, Iron.

BASICS
NAME: Aevalae
GENDER: Cis Female
PRONOUNS: She/Her/Hers
ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
BIRTHDATE: Early Fall 2748
AGE: 25 as of Early Summer 2773
LOCATION: High Reaches
OCCUPATION: Dragonrider (Green)
WING: Starfall

APPEARANCE

EYES: Hazel
HAIR: Strawberry Blonde
HEIGHT AND BUILD: 5'6" | Slender
PLAY-BY: January Jones

FULL APPEARANCE:

Aevalae is an average height woman with a slender build, though she has a few extra pounds she could lose if she really decided to, having not really lost them from her previous pregnancies. Her hair is long, reddish brown and hangs in long curls down her back or tied back with a scarf or some leather strings. Her eyes are warm hazel in color and often there is a bit of mischief or quiet intelligence behind their gaze. She often wears practical clothes and simple dresses, depending on the weather in plain and easy to obtain dye colors. Her one exception is her gathering dress which is a rich purple and cost her months of saving marks to obtain.

PERSONALITY

PERSONALITY:

Aevalae is a rather clever woman and enjoys a good game of the mind or a mystery she can cut her teeth into, so to speak. A largely competitive spirit when it comes to winning at any challenge presented to her, be it a game, a task or of any kind, she can be ruthless and not above using a perceived weakness in her opponent to her advantage and not feel guilt for doing so. Losing is not an option and if/when she does, she will remain bitter and angry about it. She is also not above holding a grudge over the smallest slight to her person and these can last sometimes years, depending on the perceived offense.

But getting into her good graces and small circle of friends is no easy task, as she is very wary of people and trust and respect is something that has to be proven and earned with her. She will respect a chain of command, but that does not mean she has to like the person behind it or be their friend. She will keep most people at a professional distance for the most part.

She also has a very dry sarcastic wit she does not hold in and it can be abrasive and and rude, but again, she does not care if she steps on someone's feelings to get her point across or win at an argument. The only time she is ever really a team player is during Threadfall and with her wing and daily duties, as despite being a pain in the arse to deal with personally, she is no stranger to hard work.

HISTORY

FAMILY:

Mother ( Living) - Rider
Father (Living)- Rider
Older brother ( Living) - Rider (open tie)

Aevallen () - Daughter



SIGNIFICANT OTHER: Cullen of Brown Lyriuth (tie in the works)
BIRTHPLACE: High Reaches Weyr

HISTORY:

[Ezra]

Avanith

" Aevalae, there you are! Come my dear, we have a lot of work to do."

BASICS
NAME: Avanith
BIRTHDATE Early Summer 2763
AGE: 10 as of Early Summer 2773

CLUTCHING
CLUTCHING: NO
RUNS/FLIGHTS: 3

APPEARANCE

LENGTH: 32 ft
HEIGHT: 8 ft
WINGSPAN: 46ft
COLOR: Green
HEX CODE: #688971

FULL APPEARANCE:

Avanith is a large and muscular green, a pale almost mint in her hue on the main part of her body, she has some darker hunter green socks on her back legs, the sock part of the front of the legs reaching higher than on the back side. Her face and head knobs are painted the same deep hunter green, almost like she is wearing a mask. Her wing sails are splashed with the same darker hue as her head and back legs, looking as if someone shook a paintbrush of the color over them.

PERSONALITY

PERSONALITY:

Avanith is a spirited and determined green. She supports her rider with all her being and there is nothing she would not do to protect them. Her dreams to bring peace back to Pern often clash with her rider's and the green is not shy about digging her heels in and refusing to move, pouting like a child if it wins her the argument. An active dragon, she often will find other things to occupy her and keep her outside long after her rider takes a break for the night.

She has a slight type when it comes to her flights however, she is all about blues and browns only. She will accept female identifying of these colors but anything other than those, and she will either ignore or bash them verbally with a scathing tirade. She is a dragon who knows what she wants and only accepts what she wants.

[Ezra]

She is ready for first pass.

[Jabberwoky]

Here we go.

What is her flaw? Being competitive at games and using ruthless tactics to win is not a flaw, because it only comes out in very specific circumstances. "Ruthless" doesn't necessarily mean most people would see anything wrong with it; it could just mean not letting things slip when she thinks other people want to win. Is she so unable to tolerate losing that she would dunk on small children? Then her flaw needs to be presented as win at all costs, regardless of who gets hurt. Does she cheat? Then that needs to be made explicit. Not liking to talk about her mother is also not a flaw.

As Fel is apping a character named Alanna, her mother's name will have to be changed. Note that as Alanna and George are popular protagonists in their own right, unless her parents are taken as character ties, other people will still be permitted to expy them at whatever age and with whatever relation to Alianne they choose.

When did she transfer to High Reaches? What has she been doing in that time other than getting pregnant? Has she been ignoring the plot around her? Her history needs some mention of when she moved, and what she's been doing. I would like to see the children spaced out a little more. 3 kids in 3 years would be against any Healer's recommendation, especially since Riders have birth control. Riders cannot get pregnant by chance, and since they Between nearly every day, they would have to take a break from their duties to do so, since it is not guaranteed that one intimate time during a flight will cause instant pregnancy.

[Ezra]

For the sake of my own sanity and just making things a bit easier all around, I decided to scrap the expy concept and doing a rework with a full OC. Honestly would have just been an ordeal for all to change everything and a disservice to us both. I will have it done by tomorrow evening. Just have to reconfigure her history and amend her personality, which should not be too difficult.