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Jeremy of Garnet Jerask (RFR Event)

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Jeremy of Garnet Jerask (RFR Event)

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BASICS

NAME: Jeremy
GENDER: Male
PRONOUNS: He/Him
ORIENTATION: Heterosexual

BIRTHDATE: Early Spring 2743
AGE: 30 as of late Summer 2773
LOCATION: Semaca Weyr
OCCUPATION: Wherhandler
WING: N/A

APPEARANCE
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Red
HEIGHT AND BUILD: Short and thin but not malnourished.
PLAY-BY: https://picrew.me/image_maker/250891
FULL APPEARANCE:
Short and small-bodied, this fair skinned man has a charismatic feel about him. A particularly notable feature is his nice smile, His short, dull, red hair is un-styled. He has piercing, little, blue eyes, small lips and large ears. He has average-sized feet, bony hips, small hands, a thin torso with no chest muscle tone and a well-defined waist, and slanted shoulders.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
Outgoing and helpful, he loves helping where he can and, while he won't start a fight he sure will finish it. He is a peace-maker but also a trouble-maker, he isn't boastful, and he can bring out the best in others. He is a risk taker, leading to trouble for him and those few he calls friends. When he isn't making trouble he likes to help his father out in the Healer's Clinic. As far as his trouble making goes, he doesn’t steal from others, thankfully, it is more of pranking others just to get a laugh. His targets on the other hand don’t find any of his pranks funny. He also likes sneaking into places he isn’t supposed to be, like sneaking onto the Hatching Sands when there are eggs, though he doesn’t get close enough to be spotted by the Queen and or her Bronze mate.

His punishments range from working in the animal pens to working in the kitchens, both those things he hates doing. When he isn’t pulling pranks, or helping his dad in the Healer’s Clinic, he is doing classwork or running messages around the Weyr for those that don’t have Fire Lizards. He would love having his own Fire Lizard, so he keeps a look out for Eggs.

HISTORY
FAMILY:
Thomas (Father)
Ashley (Mother)
SIGNIFICANT OTHER: N/A
BIRTHPLACE: Semaca
HISTORY:
Jeremy was a Weyrbrat growing up, though his family weren't Riders or Handlers themselves, they work in the Lower Grotto, his father, Thomas, in the Healer's Clinic, and his mother, Ashley, in the Wash Hall. He had very few friends growing up because he always got in trouble for ending any fights, be they among animals, or among the other kids of Semaca, though any fights that broke out among the Candidates, Wherlings or Weyrlings he left alone.

It wasn't until his 20th Turn that he got picked to stand for one of the Wher clutches, he was down right nervous. He had helped the Wher Handlers that came to the Clinic before, so he was used to the long nights that said Handlers faced. He was so nervous in fact that it wasn't till one of the eggs was placed in his arms that he snapped out of it and bonded with the Garnet that hatched from said egg.
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NAME: Jerask
BIRTHDATE: Late Fall 2763
AGE: 9 as of Late Summer 2773

CLUTCHING

CLUTCHING: YES
RUNS/FLIGHTS: 2

APPEARANCE

LENGTH: 14.75 ft
HEIGHT: 5 ft
COLOR: Garnet
HEX CODE: #B800B1
FULL APPEARANCE:
Jerask is a Watch-wher with a pale garnet colored hide, a magenta marble pattern adorning her whole body. Spikes run along her spine and most of her tail, which ends in a split tip. A small neck frill can be seen behind her head. Her eyes are a green color with no sclera visible on the outside. Her ribs can be seen through her skin and her muscles are rather defined, meaning she gets plenty of food and as much exercise as she wants.

PERSONALITY

PERSONALITY:
Jerask is a very quiet Wher. Her mood can be surly at times, she only opens up to her Handler, being very careful not to show her soft side to anyone but her handler, and if asked J'ramy denies that Jerask even has a soft side. The only time anyone has seen this side of her is when she helps younger Whers and their handlers get settled into their new lives. She doesn't take kindly to people making fun of her handler, those that do find themselves on the bad side of the Garnet Wher. Thankfully she hasn't hurt anyone, just scared them half to death.
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-Only dragonriders elide their names. That's not a wherhandler thing. He should just be "Jeremy."

-Jeremy needs a squad.

-Please link the Picrew you used to make his image.

-Jeremy is a 30 turn old wherhandler, who has been a handler for 9 turns. As a wherhandler, he'd have his own job and responsibilities. He wouldn't be doing random chores or running messages around or helping out his father or attending classes. That's more the sort of thing a candidate or weyrbrat does. He'd be doing whatever it is his particular squad does. If he is really untrustworthy, he'd be in Lamentoso but he'd still be doing whatever it is the squad is assigned to do.

-Queens do not always pick bronzes as mates on TPA. Also as an adult wherhandler, why would he risk getting in trouble sneaking into the hatching sands?

-Firelizard eggs aren't particularly rare or expensive on TPA. He can just buy one from the nearby pirates or get one from someone whose flit has clutched.

-Overall this personality reads more like a 15 turn old candidate than a 30 turn old wherhandler. Please revise it a bit to reflect who he'd be as an adult, after nearly a decade as a wherhandler.

-Semaca did not exist 30 turns ago. The weyr was only founded in 2765 (about 8 turns ago as of now).

-"He had very few friends growing up because he always got in trouble for ending any fights, be they among animals, or among the other kids of Semaca, though any fights that broke out among the Candidates, Wherlings or Weyrlings he left alone."

I don't see why this would make it hard for him to make friends or why he'd get in trouble for it. Most kids don't want to be fighting most of the time.

-Weyr kids at weyrs other than Semaca can start standing for wher clutches as soon as they turn 17. There's no special application or selection process- you just volunteer and so long as you don't cause too much trouble, you're allowed to stand, where you might or might not get selected for an egg.

-Jeremy's history ends with his Impression. He's been a wherhandler for nearly a third of his life. What's happened since in his life?
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