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Beatty Of Garnet Zinrelorth [RFR][GATCHA]

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"What is it about fire that’s so lovely? No matter what age we are, what draws us to it?"

BASICS

NAME: Beatty
GENDER: Male
PRONOUNS: He/Him/His
ORIENTATION: Heterosexual

BIRTHDATE: Early Summer 2738
AGE: 38, 38 as of Late Winter 2775
LOCATION: Semaca Weyr
OCCUPATION: Garnet Rider
WING: Nocturne Wing

APPEARANCE
EYES: Blue Eyes
HAIR: Black , kept smartly brushed
HEIGHT AND BUILD: 6'3, strong and fit
PLAY-BY: Richard Gere
EXPY SOURCE: Captain Beatty (Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury )
FULL APPEARANCE:
Beatty is an imposing man, of stature and face. Although years of toil have taken their turn on his face in the form of creases and lesser wrinkles among the man’s face. He keeps a shaven face and well-groomed hair. His hair a striking black, brushed back, and lightly grizzled with signs of white hairs.

Beatty sticks to a more uniform look, shirts tucked in and held in place with gloves, and riding gloves tucked into them. He has an assortment of black wherry hide boots which produce a peculiar clicking noise on weyr stone when he walks on it.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
Beatty is a man who is deeply conflicted internally about Pernese society, especially in Traditional Weyrs, and expresses it with hypocritical views, always putting metallic riders above ranking officers. Yet, blindly follows instructions from his officers when needed, always ready for the call to action. Obedient simply from his sense of duty, wanting to upkeep his reputation. A charismatic fellow, Beatty is quick to show a smile to get his way, a white lie or two never hurt anybody. He has the habit of trying to butter people up, with them in his hand like dice he won’t have any problems, pulling strings to act out his plan.

Beatty has a sort of temper, becoming angry at others when they don't follow his plans to the letter. He needs to control things and ensure they go his way afraid of failing. He doesn't dare show people that side of him, failure causes him to falter, feeling vulnerable in those moments. He can hold grudges but lets them go easily when the person explains themselves to him.

HISTORY
FAMILY:
Bronzerider Father
Greenrider Mother
Younger Sister
Older Brother
SIGNIFICANT OTHER: It's Complicated
BIRTHPLACE: Benden Weyr
HISTORY:
Beatty was born in Benden Weyr, the eldest son of a bronze and green rider. From young, traditional ideals were ingrained into his head by his father and weyr. His father convinced Beatty would become a bronze rider and rise to the top of the ranks. Those around him encouraged him accordingly, to be the best he could, this would be (without a doubt) another case of like father, like son.

17 years of Weyr life started to bore Beatty, he wanted more to it at that moment , something he couldn’t accomplish yet. Left standing at his first hatching , the boy and his friends decided to attend the Hold’s gather to cheer themselves up. A harper’s songs never hurt anybody! Amongst all the twirling colourful skirts , certain vendors and melodic harpers Beatty saw the girl who would change his life Mayla. From that moment his heart belonged to her and her alone. The stars alone were witness to their meeting, dancing until the sun showed signs of life.

Through out his candidacy, spare time was incredibly valuable to Beatty. In those small moments he would head down to Mayla’s hold atop a white or a green running errands to her hold. Using precious hours teaching her patiently to read and write wishing every waking moment that he could spend every day by her side. He fantasised often that’s she would be his weyrmate, a perfect match for a stunning gold. She would be his right hand . If only she got searched first by some blue rider and brought to Benden together they’d rise ranks on bronze and gold. Or so he thought.

While candidacy passed it seemed to Beatty that his social group became smaller with every hatching passed. Friends impressing to “wrong” colours, why should he, a future bronze rider, affiliate himself with such people? A man riding green, all types of wrong there. And garnets… just seeing one would have his blood boil , mutations that should’ve never existed on Pern. Shunning friends one by one , he was left with only a handful of candidate friends and Mayla.

With the pass of turn came another gold flight, and so a large and healthy clutch for Benden. Beatty saw a queen egg, a bronze egg, and knew that they were for him and Mayla. If they impressed them, together they could rule Benden... they would go so far. And so easily was his illusion shattered when simultaneously, two sister garnets hatched. Of similar hide with only small differences, the boy's stomach turned at the sight of them. Sneering at Mayla, wondering to which poor soul they'd impress too. But those little garnets had decided, the pair making their way to the lovers.

One so confident in her choice, so regal, so beautiful, and yet so furious when Beatty pushed her head aside. Punished by her claws, a bloody scratch to the thigh. Eyes glaring at each other while rainbows swirled and the unmistakable bond formed between them

Oh honey, Beatty, this life's a show, be my partner won't cha' darling?

Beatty automatically hated Zinerlorth, this smooth-talking garnet was not his righteous partner and yet he could not bring himself to order her between. A little after, his bronze hatched, to someone not worthy of him. All while the now rider had his little internal meltdown, Mayla impressed Zinrelorth's sister, Reapirith. No, it would not do. They were meant to be gold rider and bronzer rider, not garnet riders!

The man refused to talk to Mayla after the hatching, Zinrelorth however did not care about her rider's feelings. After all, what did he know? He can't boss her around, the garnet being quite fond of her sister and her rider. Weyrlinghood was not the best, immediately being laughed at by his parents for not achieving his goals, both father and mother ignored him for the rest of his time at Benden Weyr. His brother impressed brown mid-way through his candidacy and his sister a wherhandler, both very much loved by his parents but not him. Why not him?

Zin clashed a lot with Beatty, why wouldn't this small man not love her? She's perfect in every single way and yet her beloved would hate her, get angry at her for not being the shiny little dragon he wanted. Over time Zin and Beatty clashed and clashed over and over again, neither budging in what they wanted. The garnet hated that he loved Mayla and yet refused to because of his views. Beatty left Benden Weyr a month after graduation, transferring to Igen.

There many of his old friends had gone, away from Benden. Hopelessly trying to rekindle lost friendships, he too was one of them now, bonded to the wrong colour. But they didn't want him, no, not after how he treated them because of their dragon's colour. Igen was traditional but less than Benden, there the pair wouldn't be discriminated against and could live life simply. Zin was rather pleased with the new Weyr, a brand new stage, meant a brand new audience. Things began to settle nicely for the pair.

A new turn boils over and Zin is well into her years. She longs for more, for a new stage. Taking to bugging Beatty over and over each day, she knew she was correct for them to take flight to somewhere nicer. And while, Igen is fantastic but one can only stand so much. Semaca Weyr calls out for the pair, a promise of adventure and equality. The two set their marks for the strange Southlands, wondering who they'll meet and what they'll see.

And there, descending to their new lives, Zinrelorth spots a face all too friendly. Mayla and Reaprith.
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Stand tall, no creases, chin up! Act better and you'll become better.


BASICS

NAME:Zinrelorth (Zin to her friends)
BIRTHDATE Late Summer 2762
AGE: 13 as of 2776

CLUTCHING

CLUTCHING:NO
RUNS/FLIGHTS: 2

APPEARANCE
LENGTH: 40 ft
HEIGHT: 10 ft
WINGSPAN: 60 ft
COLOR: Garnet
HEX CODE:#564E53
FULL APPEARANCE:
Almost identical to Reapirirth, Zinrelorth is of dark blackcurrant hide as if she was left out in the sun for far too long and the sun had darkened her hide far too much. Her head is painted a terribly light purple. Her ribcage and bones are accented by her markings, resembling the skull and cross bones on a pirate's flag.

Built more for gliding rather than long flights, her wings are far too big for her small narrow body. She has thin silver scars accenting her wings from years of flying in threadfall.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
To this garnet, the world is a stage. Her stage to be exact. Zinerlorth knows that everyone loves her and thinks she's absolutely stunning, why wouldn't they? She's simply delightful! Zin adores attention , she’ll take it from whoever , male and female. The garnet knows what she wants and how to achieve it, is quite headstrong, and won't let others boss her around. Zin acts like a refined lady, calling everyone "honey", "darling" and other endearing titles. She will not allow others to ignore her or push her side, getting aggressive to get her way. Her opinions are the correct ones, and Faranth forbid someone oppose her on them!

Zin adores Beatty, always will, and always has no matter what. He's her showbiz partner! They dance their way through this life, stuck together. Zinrelorth will reprimand him when he does something wrong, keeping him in check. After all, they have a reputation to upkeep! She takes their arguments with a pinch of salt, after all, they're just a sign that they love each other.

Voice: Zinrelorth has a bassy feminine voice, sometimes picking up a singing voice as if there was a soundtrack to her life
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ready for first round of reviews ^^
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-"Igen was traditional and that placed him above other colours, a worthy rank for a man like him he thought."

Garnetriders don't occupy any special place at Igen. While Igen is a traditional weyr it is not nearly as strict as Benden- the color hierarchy won't define much of day to day lives.

-Zinrelorth needs a birthdate and age filled in.

-Zinrelorth does not look like she could be mistaken for a white, regardless of the lighting.

-If my math is correct, Beatty will need to be aged down a bit. The first garnet did not hatch until 2760 and we are not accepting garnets from before 2761. The maximum candidate age at Benden would be 25, which means Beatty can be at most 40.
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Essa of Bronze Gectusith
Hunter of Bronze Yndesk
Quinn of Bronze-White Louicyth
Wingleader S'bor of Bronze Yugoth
Allag of Brown Babyloth
Daphne of Brown Ogatath
ACM Estelle of Brown Jaehaeryth
Faralyn of Brown Grooth
Gymlin of Brown Glacendath
Ieyasu of Brown Ieyask
P'pin of Brown Palath
T'rin of Brown Celeth
Cole of Garnet Colsk and Blue Colodeosk
G'er of Garnet Neozeoth
Lily of Garnet Eridieth
N'ell of Garnet Pamith
Relli of Garnet Rellivask and Blue Relsk
Augury of Blue Velveth
Chrysanthe of Blue Bidath
Gellera of Blue Virtrath
Korra of Blue Raavath
Kyoshi of Blue Rugrunth
Miryem of Blue Riwenth
Thor of Blue Hinokath
Sam'in of Blue Salineath
Adora of Green Meilith
Elyron of Green Elyrosk
Kiriani of Green Tabesleuth
Wingsecond L'ir of Green Byth
Quintar of Green Task
S'atyl of Green Nineveth
Makoto of White Usakinth
M'ieln of White Hroth
Rhaenys of White Cosmiath
Wingleader Tyrion of White Voluntauth
Actaeon
Mithras
High Reaches
Cynthia of Gold Eliask
Ce'na of Bronze Noath
Hela of Bronze Helsk and Brown Hesk
Azul of Brown Claarisath
Di'a of Brown Kasshuth
Dobby of Brown Kersuth
I'lir of Brown Belliorath
Ingrid of Brown Delinarth
Wingleader Myalla of Brown Enarth
Th'ou of Brown Pavith
Wingsecond D'ark of Garnet Masreith
Squadsecond Tomas of Garnet Tomask and White Tsk
Weyrling Master Camilla of Blue Kamuith
Edda of Blue Katakurth
Jace of Blue Gallath
Jae of Blue Zappath
Sayla of Blue Sacroth
Sha'm of Blue Taarisoth
Tamara of Blue Requeth
Ya'ra of Blue Dymrith
Yvaen of Blue Bolduth
Zhuli of Blue Zhusk and Blue Lisk
Kanon of Green Kibeth
Kip of Green Amizuth
Numann of Green Rannath
Raine of Green Spriggth
Wilred of Green Lresk and Blue Wilrsk
Sokka of Green Wintrath
T'ir of Green Blysith
Riku of White Taissath
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Arena of Void Oscamith
Alayna of Gold Wyzeth
Al'bus of Bronze Matanuth
Noor of Bronze Nuunieth
Schneizel of Bronze Damocleth
Hermione of Brown Echoneth
K'zon of Brown Rurosuth
Sage of Brown Wisketoth
Shuri of Brown Motath
Varda of Brown Magmeth
Ei of Garnet Eisk
Karlach of Garnet Ussk
Ly'nk of Garnet Sakuyath
Maui of Garnet Mausk and Blue Mask
Uruk of Garnet Georsath
Artemis of Blue Phoebuth
Corleon of Blue Corleosk and White Corlesk
D'vir of Blue Cainhurth
Candidatemaster Naxen of Blue Anitoth
N'aya of Blue Ilouth
Point Rigel of Blue Cygneth
Ariel of Green Kshatriyath
Eleanor of Green Elsk
Eli'us of Green Sallith
Mi'wa of Green Ephiith
Natsuno of Green Minamith
L'ani of Green Haillenarth
Rhea of Green Rheask
Captain Vella of Green Vellask and Magma Vesk
V'rell of Green Peridoth
Wyatt of Green Emilith
Laera of White Tarth
Kowal of White Kowalsk
Pasca of White Judgmeth
R'tan of White Mazath
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Edits made !
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I think your date math still needs some adjustment:

Zinrelorth should be 15, not 5, as of 2776
Beatty's birth turn should be 2738
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Essa of Bronze Gectusith
Hunter of Bronze Yndesk
Quinn of Bronze-White Louicyth
Wingleader S'bor of Bronze Yugoth
Allag of Brown Babyloth
Daphne of Brown Ogatath
ACM Estelle of Brown Jaehaeryth
Faralyn of Brown Grooth
Gymlin of Brown Glacendath
Ieyasu of Brown Ieyask
P'pin of Brown Palath
T'rin of Brown Celeth
Cole of Garnet Colsk and Blue Colodeosk
G'er of Garnet Neozeoth
Lily of Garnet Eridieth
N'ell of Garnet Pamith
Relli of Garnet Rellivask and Blue Relsk
Augury of Blue Velveth
Chrysanthe of Blue Bidath
Gellera of Blue Virtrath
Korra of Blue Raavath
Kyoshi of Blue Rugrunth
Miryem of Blue Riwenth
Thor of Blue Hinokath
Sam'in of Blue Salineath
Adora of Green Meilith
Elyron of Green Elyrosk
Kiriani of Green Tabesleuth
Wingsecond L'ir of Green Byth
Quintar of Green Task
S'atyl of Green Nineveth
Makoto of White Usakinth
M'ieln of White Hroth
Rhaenys of White Cosmiath
Wingleader Tyrion of White Voluntauth
Actaeon
Mithras
High Reaches
Cynthia of Gold Eliask
Ce'na of Bronze Noath
Hela of Bronze Helsk and Brown Hesk
Azul of Brown Claarisath
Di'a of Brown Kasshuth
Dobby of Brown Kersuth
I'lir of Brown Belliorath
Ingrid of Brown Delinarth
Wingleader Myalla of Brown Enarth
Th'ou of Brown Pavith
Wingsecond D'ark of Garnet Masreith
Squadsecond Tomas of Garnet Tomask and White Tsk
Weyrling Master Camilla of Blue Kamuith
Edda of Blue Katakurth
Jace of Blue Gallath
Jae of Blue Zappath
Sayla of Blue Sacroth
Sha'm of Blue Taarisoth
Tamara of Blue Requeth
Ya'ra of Blue Dymrith
Yvaen of Blue Bolduth
Zhuli of Blue Zhusk and Blue Lisk
Kanon of Green Kibeth
Kip of Green Amizuth
Numann of Green Rannath
Raine of Green Spriggth
Wilred of Green Lresk and Blue Wilrsk
Sokka of Green Wintrath
T'ir of Green Blysith
Riku of White Taissath
Aragon
Pyeta
Semaca Weyr
Arena of Void Oscamith
Alayna of Gold Wyzeth
Al'bus of Bronze Matanuth
Noor of Bronze Nuunieth
Schneizel of Bronze Damocleth
Hermione of Brown Echoneth
K'zon of Brown Rurosuth
Sage of Brown Wisketoth
Shuri of Brown Motath
Varda of Brown Magmeth
Ei of Garnet Eisk
Karlach of Garnet Ussk
Ly'nk of Garnet Sakuyath
Maui of Garnet Mausk and Blue Mask
Uruk of Garnet Georsath
Artemis of Blue Phoebuth
Corleon of Blue Corleosk and White Corlesk
D'vir of Blue Cainhurth
Candidatemaster Naxen of Blue Anitoth
N'aya of Blue Ilouth
Point Rigel of Blue Cygneth
Ariel of Green Kshatriyath
Eleanor of Green Elsk
Eli'us of Green Sallith
Mi'wa of Green Ephiith
Natsuno of Green Minamith
L'ani of Green Haillenarth
Rhea of Green Rheask
Captain Vella of Green Vellask and Magma Vesk
V'rell of Green Peridoth
Wyatt of Green Emilith
Laera of White Tarth
Kowal of White Kowalsk
Pasca of White Judgmeth
R'tan of White Mazath
Steward Molly
Athan
Tarva
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