Kurama of Green Rosaceaeth [LFI]

[MothyCake]

Kurama of Green Rosaceaeth

"The more impatient we are, the more mistakes we'll make." - Kurama, Yu Yu Hakusho

BASICS
NAME: Kurama
GENDER: Male
PRONOUNS: Masculine
ORIENTATION: Homosexual

BIRTHDATE: Spring 2750
AGE: 20 as of Late Winter 2770
LOCATION: Semaca Weyr
OCCUPATION: Dragonrider
WING: Requiem Squad

APPEARANCE
EYES: Green
HAIR: Red
HEIGHT AND BUILD: 5'8" and Lithe
PLAY-BY: Kurama (Yu Yu Hakusho)
FULL APPEARANCE:
Kurama has extremely long red hair that will often go down to his midback. Due to this and his lithe body, it is hard at first glance what gender he identifies as. He will often wear warmer colors in his clothing, but will wear light greys and dark greens as well.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
Kurama had a very sharp mind. He reacts quickly on changing during dangerous situations, making him very skilled when it comes to hunting spotties in the jungle outside of Semaca. He seems to have a lot of good potential to become a wingleader or a point, but he had no interest in doing so. In his words, he is 'perfectly fine just doing his job and he isn't really fit for leadership'. He tends to be easy-going as well, often appearing relaxed. He seems to feel the most calm around nature and, if he had never impressed, he would have likely returned to studying farmercraft.

However, it is incredibly easy to manipulate Kurama. He has a kind heart and will often go out of his way to help others in need. Just one sob story is enough to get him to go out of his way to help someone, much to the annoyance of his dragon. He is willing to do anything to help those in need. This includes sacrificing his own happiness and wellbeing. This can often end up with him being injured, or not receiving credit where credit was due. Due to this, Rosaceaeth and him often bicker with the dragon trying to stop him from helping everyone.

HISTORY
FAMILY:
Mother (Deceased)
Father
Brother
SIGNIFICANT OTHER: N/A
BIRTHPLACE: Minor Hold
HISTORY:
- Life in a minor hold
- Becoming an apprentice
- Life at Telgar Weyr
- Impressing to Rosaceaeth, mother's death
- Moving to Semaca, brother becomes candidate

[MothyCake]

Rosaceaeth



BASICS
NAME: Rosaceaeth
BIRTHDATE Summer 2767
AGE: Three as of Early Spring 2771

CLUTCHING
CLUTCHING: Yes
RUNS/FLIGHTS: 1

APPEARANCE
LENGTH: 26ft
HEIGHT: 7.5ft
WINGSPAN: 41.8ft
COLOR: Green
HEX CODE: #60D99E
FULL APPEARANCE:
While Rosaceaeth is a taller than average green, his tail is a bit shorter than most dragons his size. His main body is a gradient of mint green (head) down to a dark green (tail). On his shoulders, a rose is very visible, with a thorny vine leaving from the marking. The vine wraps around his body and tail. Along with this, branches peek out from the rose, leaves visible. The inside of his wings are filled with markings resembling a rose and it's petals. These markings are a bright seafoam green color.

PERSONALITY
PERSONALITY:
Rosaceaeth is the calm before the storm. He is quite capable of fighting and is an aggressive dragon when he fights. However, he often appears quite calm, almost unnaturally so. He is somewhat cold when speaking, and is often one to speak his mind in a deadpan voice. He tends to think of most people as annoyances and prefers to be alone.

To Kurama, he is often one to remark that the other is too kind. This is often retorted with his rider saying that he's too cold. The two have a nice balance. He has no interest in flirting. He will rise, but will often remark in mild annoyance when other dragons flirt with him otherwise.

[Fel]

This profile, after being reviewed by multiple staff members, reads far too similarly to the wiki of the character he's an expy of. We will do no further reviews until a complete rewrite is done, as in its current state, it seems possible that some of the app may be plagiarized. We have a saved copy of this version and will check to make sure it's completely rewritten—not just reworded.

[MothyCake]

I reworked the personality c:

[MothyCake]

Questions:
- Is the personality rework better/more acceptable from the original?
- If it isn't, could you give me advice on how to improve with it?